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Persuasive writing

Filed under: General News — pawlusek at 4:12 pm on Friday, May 18, 2018
  1. Thank you for your great persuasive writing letters! Some great suggestions! We would like you to share these on the blog with us and comment on some of the great ideas and persuasive ideas we have used. 



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   Rose B

May 19, 2018 @ 9:16 am   Reply

Dear Mrs Panter / Clews,
My name is Rose and I would like you to always let us have afternoon break.f And we don’t have to earn it. If we do we will come back in ready to learn.

   Ziras

May 19, 2018 @ 6:10 pm   Reply

Dear Mrs.Clews,

In football, you need to have some shots and if you win all of your games you get in any finals so like the carbon cup you need to get in the finals like semi or quarter or the finals and when you get the cup you celebrate with your teammates for winning the carbon cup and your manager/boss will be delighted for winning the carbon cup. That’s why we should have football games in school.

Your’s sincerely
ZIRAS THOMAS

   Maya Klinkenberg

May 20, 2018 @ 10:31 am   Reply

Dear Mrs Panter

I would like you to increase our break time because it can make us learn faster and better. Did you know you can loose weight because it helps with vitamin d which is good for your skin and hair. It will improve children’s social skills and it will keep you active. You will have a fresh mind after break so you will store and absorb more knowledge.It shall also reduce your blood sugar so you don’t become over weighted. As a result the more breaks we have the more pupils will learn.

Sincerely yours

Maya

   Owen

May 20, 2018 @ 10:48 am   Reply

Dear mrs panter and mrs clews
I think we should have more movement breaks in the school day.
It would help people to stay focused. We need more exercise like football,basketball.
You have to help us stay healthy and fit.It’s essential that we get lots of fresh air.

   Jaydnn N

May 20, 2018 @ 11:40 am   Reply

Dear Mr Pawlusek ,

I am writing to tell you that , I have a request is about our class having extra playtime.

It is not fair that year 2 and 1 have a longer break but not year 3 .

Break time can help us to be fit and healthy by running ,skipping, and doing other sporting activities.

In addition to this, I would like to mention that going outside makes our mind fresh .

Yours sincerely
Jaydnn Nimfah

   Hadley Burston

May 20, 2018 @ 12:04 pm   Reply

Dear Mr Pawlusek,

I think you are a great teacher and I know a way you could be an even better one. If you made break times around 10 minutes longer you would have more time to plan lessons , further more teachers on break duty would get more fresh air. All children like breaks so they would like it to. It would make them happy and more work is accomplished when people are happy. Just think if more work is accomplished then you never know you might get a special award. If you got an award other schools and parents might join the school then you don’t have to do as much teaching that means more planning so you are an even better teacher! Since some of my friends are in different classes to me I don’t get to see them as much but if you made breaks longer I get to see them more, also I could tell them what a brilliant teacher you are. I hope I have convinced you to give extra playtime from your biggest fan had slee I could tell them what a brilliant teacher you are. I hope I have convinced you to give extra playtime from your biggest fan Hadley.

   Freya Neeson

May 20, 2018 @ 1:20 pm   Reply

Sir Pawlusek,

please may we have a longer break, it will energise our brains and make us ready to learn. It also makes us fitter and healthier.

What happens if you don’t allow this, well our brain wont be new and fresh and ready to learn. All the interesting facts you have taught us will slip out of our brains which mean terrible results for the school. At least 10 minutes extra would mean that we could run of the energy and concentrate more in class.
Lots of people are not fit and healthy these days, so by having more break you could make the fittest school ever

I hope this is enough to persuade you

Yours sincerely

Freya Neeson

   vanessa

May 20, 2018 @ 7:03 pm   Reply

Dear teacher can you change maths to art because it is fun.If you can,t change maths to art can we do more time in art can we do maths in art fashion.

   Amy de Maid

May 21, 2018 @ 6:05 pm   Reply

Dear Señor, Pawlusek. I am writing to you because I would like a longer play time. It would be a good idea to do so it will energise our brains which means we can focus better in school and we will remember things you have taught us. What will happen if you don’t let us have a longer break time? We will be dumb and forget everything you have taught us which will bring poor results to our school.

I hope this is enough to persuade you

yours sincerely, Amy

   Sophia

May 21, 2018 @ 6:44 pm   Reply

Dear Miss Panter

I would like more PE lessons in school because it is proven to keep children fit and healthy. I would also like more book reading because it keeps your brain working and improves children’s writing.

More PE lessons will also improve every child’s concentration in class time, which will benefit everyone.

Please consider my proposal.

Yours sincerely
Sophia Jenkinson

   Riley

May 21, 2018 @ 7:27 pm   Reply

Dear Mrs Panter, I wrote to you asking if we could sit on chairs instead of the carpet. Sitting on the bumpy, lumpy carpet makes it hard to concentrate and everyone shuffles closer to Jaidon making us all squashed. You said that children would have their back to the teacher if we sat on chairs. Not if we all moved our chairs to look at you. Any one messing about can then sit back on the floor. Problem solved. Thank you. Riley.

   Julia Skierska

May 22, 2018 @ 8:16 am   Reply

Dear Mr Daniel Pawlusek,

I would like to talk about teachers having sweets in class. It is not fair that teachers,
are allowed to have sweets, when children can’t.Once a friend of mine said that
once he had a yummy chocolate [this happened in reception], and a teacher took it
of him.Later on, he saw two teachers sharing out HIS chocolate on a plate. THAT WAS
SO UNFAIR. That is why I think laws should be the same for everyone and everybody
should stick to them.

From Julia.S 😉

   Rochelle Douglas

June 1, 2018 @ 12:42 pm   Reply

Dear Mrs Panter ,Miss Clews please may we sit on the chairs instead of the floor because it will make us have a better view of what is going on also the hole class will be equal about who is sitting on the chairs and who is not sitting on the sets as well.
Also can we have more breaks because then we will stop thinking about the first lesson you tort us .And our brains will work harder.

   KLEA C

June 23, 2018 @ 2:50 pm   Reply

Dear Mrs Rmshal /vee pleas can you make it free to play an insterment because people want to play an insterment but it is to expensive and they really want to but they cant it will be great because it is really good to play an insterment and you will get to know things you did not know about an insterment and it will be a great oputunaty to play an insterment PLEASE PLEASE make it free to play an insterment FROM KLEA

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